Tuesday, 5 April 2016

Sunday, 3 April 2016

The dream giver

Description:this is my story about the dream giver.


Hi I'm zombie bob but call me bob for short I get the nightmares out of everyone my secret is when the doors are locked I smash the window open.i have special eggs they are special golden eggs.if I drop these delicious eggs evil will happen. I read minds to see what they are dreaming about.i shape shift to ants and the ants help me smash window quieter.zombie bob is done working today bye.         
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