Tuesday, 24 March 2015
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Thursday, 5 March 2015
What did I do well?
What do I need to do next time?
Wednesday, 4 March 2015
Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.
WALT: Entertain (character description)
Think of a character you could write about.
Introduce your character in an entertaining way.
Describe their looks.
Describe their personality.
I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)
Criteria: I can
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
use a range of verbs
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
select one or two similes
use onomatopoeia to show sounds
select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)
My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)
Learning Partner Comment good Writeing
Feedback: I love the way you did the picture
Feedforward: Next time tider Writeing
Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?
Awsememan is totals as a house he mit look evil but he's good
And cool he's
GotTadowe on his tummy. He is strong.he can Besh down a billding. That's why name he's got same muslse on he's Neak.i