Thursday, 26 March 2015


I am working on Unique and original
I can Use my whole body to make actions

Tuesday, 24 March 2015

Thursday, 12 March 2015

Spelling test

Saw were or what which  again away because very every 

I,m good at spalling last year   I mite of got some rong  

Thursday, 5 March 2015


voice over or written points of: 
“Here are some tips in how to swim backstroke: 
1. pointed toes, 
straight knees, 
kicking from your bottom, 
fingers together, 
bring your arm up straight and past your ear, 
pinky finger in first. 
Head relaxed in an upward position."

How am I going?Hard

What am I doing well?
I backstroke 
What do I need to work on?
I need to work on...brest stoke 

Welcome to my blog

WALT Inform (entertaining and persuading our audience to visit our blog)

- welcome to our blog!
- show pictures of some of your learning (butterflies etc.)
- who are you friends?
- things you like (paper planes!)
- places we like to play
- 45seconds

- clear video
- smooth camera action
- talking about interests 
- in an interesting way
- using interesting camera angles
- action
- talked about learning

What did I do well?
The music
What do I need to do next time?


Buddy's spalling

Wednesday, 4 March 2015

Writing sapile


Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)


Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can

Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment good Writeing 

Feedback: I love the way you did the picture 

Feedforward: Next time tider Writeing


Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?

Awsememan is totals as a house he mit look evil but he's good 

And cool he's 


Tadowe on his tummy. He is strong.he can Besh down  a billding. That's why name he's got same muslse on he's Neak.i 
Wich I was hem